I have decided to extend the “beach scene” as well as shortening the “ocean” scene. This way, there are more natural predators and only one unnatural predator – as this will produce a much bigger impact and gain more empathy from the audience.

Adding the “ghost crab” as the extra predator, and also having the sand move/ slide around which will throw the baby sea turtle of balance and create more of a struggle for them to get to the sea for protection.

Also, i had decided to have the unnatural predator as an oil spill. This relates to current events as there is a stranded Venezuelan vessel in the Caribbean carrying 1.3 billion oil barrels which is tilting and has the potential to cause a catastrophic oil spill and damage a lot of the surrounding wildlife. For the oil spill I will be recoding an ink spill in water and using a projector to display this in my film for the underwater scene.

Only a few changes have been made to this one. I have aded some new perspective shots for dramatic effect – close ups to show the scared look and expression on the turtles face, extra wide shots to show the length of the beach and also to show of the set (once its done). I have also added an extra scene between the moment the baby sea turtle enters the ocean and when he begins to notice the unusual objects in the sea aka trash/ plastic etc… This extra scene is to show a the turtle having a bit of happiness as he swims with other fish and enjoys the supposedly “safety” of the sea before the actual horror begins. This also allows the audience to gain hope for the turtles safety and process that it had escaped death from the beach and to give the character a taste o a ice peaceful life before reality sets in.