I have decided to extend the “beach scene” as well as shortening the “ocean” scene. This way, there are more natural predators and only one unnatural predator – as this will produce a much bigger impact and gain more empathy from the audience.

Adding the “ghost crab” as the extra predator, and also having the sand move/ slide around which will throw the baby sea turtle of balance and create more of a struggle for them to get to the sea for protection.

Also, i had decided to have the unnatural predator as an oil spill. This relates to current events as there is a stranded Venezuelan vessel in the Caribbean carrying 1.3 billion oil barrels which is tilting and has the potential to cause a catastrophic oil spill and damage a lot of the surrounding wildlife. For the oil spill I will be recoding an ink spill in water and using a projector to display this in my film for the underwater scene.